Form for January: terza rima
Topic: beginnings OR fave snack food! (LOL)
And, I give you....mine! *wink*
A brave and bright new year has started
New habits begun with fresh pluck
Old habits and junk food have parted
New foods which offer less yuck
A walking routine will begin
A bargain with self has been struck
But a temple God gave me neglected
Weight loss is a battle I’ll win
A healthier lifestyle selected!
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10 comments:
Great job, I still don't think I get it! LOL. You have inspired me to at least have a go.
Ha! I love it. You sort of combined the two topics! I'm jealous of your writing skill.
I need to start exercising too....and the junk food has just GOT to go. I love it.
Shazaam! Wahooo!!! You combined the two!
Color me impressed, Beth :).
Gosh...I'm visiting everyone who's linked so far and I'm wowed with how WELL these are written. I don't know what I expected, but the poems have blown my expectations out of the water.
See? There is so much talent just waiting to be unleashed!! Thanks for joining in this month :).
Cool! I liked this one -- I can't believe you found a way to combine both themes!
LOL -- I got so into it that I completely forgot there were themes assigned. Oh, well. I don't have the energy to go back and do it again.
~Maria
Snacks and new beginnings. Very well integrated. You must stop snacks before they begin!
Oh I forgot to say: Nip it in the bud!
Oooh - nicely done. And you rhymed out two birds in one terza rimo!
i hope you see it thru... i could use a few off myself!!!!! very nicely done....
now that was terz rima
it flowed very nicely
you should add a second line to make a couplet at the end:
"And, so a bar she erected"
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